Sarah Potter Writes

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Monday Morning #Haiku 123 — Estuary (02)


~Blue tranquillity~
Coalesce with still river;
watch silver fish leap.

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14 thoughts on “Monday Morning #Haiku 123 — Estuary (02)

  1. This is beautiful. I love water poetry.

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  2. A beautiful and peaceful scene and haiku. Have a great week, Sarah. 🙂

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  3. I love the word choices here, Sarah, from estuary to coalesce and still river. How magical! And, as far as illusions, for a second there, I thought the (sheep?) on the far shore were the jumping fish.

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  4. kbeezyisviral on said:

    Magnificent. The beautiful imagery of peering over a still lake ripples out within this poem.

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  5. Dale on said:

    Lovely indeed!

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  6. I can feel the tranquillity here and the joy of the fish leaping 🙂

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    • The fish were beautiful and I’ve never seen such silver ones glistening like that in the sun. The water is very clean there, so I guess they’re bursting with health and vitality. Only wish that I could have photographed them jumping!

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