~Blue tranquillity~
Coalesce with still river;
watch silver fish leap.
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Sarah is a British eccentric who writes offbeat fiction, haiku and tanka poetry. When stuck for words, she sketches or paints instead. She's into nature conservation, sustainability, gardening, dogs, natural health, and reading. Her sociability is something that happens in short bursts with long breathing spaces in between.
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Thank you, David:-) It was a beautiful walk we took last week at the start of Autumn, but on a day as warm as Summer!
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This is beautiful. I love water poetry.
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Thank you 🙂 Water is such a never-ending source of inspiration with its ever-changing moods.
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A beautiful and peaceful scene and haiku. Have a great week, Sarah. 🙂
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Thank you, Sylvia:-) Yes, it was a beautiful and peaceful scene, and I’m glad I managed to reflect this in the haiku. You have a great week, too.
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I love the word choices here, Sarah, from estuary to coalesce and still river. How magical! And, as far as illusions, for a second there, I thought the (sheep?) on the far shore were the jumping fish.
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Thanks, Leigh 🙂
Lol, perhaps they’re inter-dimensional sheep-fish!
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Magnificent. The beautiful imagery of peering over a still lake ripples out within this poem.
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Thank you for your kind words 🙂
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Lovely indeed!
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Thanks, Dale 🙂
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I can feel the tranquillity here and the joy of the fish leaping 🙂
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The fish were beautiful and I’ve never seen such silver ones glistening like that in the sun. The water is very clean there, so I guess they’re bursting with health and vitality. Only wish that I could have photographed them jumping!
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