Sarah Potter Writes

Pursued by the Muses of prose, poetry, and music.

Monday Morning #Haiku 131 & 132 — Waning moon

waning-crescent-moon

Sky wears waning moon…
a wedding band part-hidden,
all shine, no craters.

Faux platinum moon
rests against midnight velvet
in a box of hope.

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17 thoughts on “Monday Morning #Haiku 131 & 132 — Waning moon

  1. Very well worked, Sarah. Love it.

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  2. Gorgeous imagery Sarah – love the image of the wedding band, the ‘all shine, no craters’ and the ‘midnight velvet’ box.

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  3. I am going to think about the “box of hope” all day! Thank you. 🙂

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  4. The sky makes a beautiful velvet box for all the shiny things of Cosmos. Love your haiku xx.

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  5. This is gorgeous dearest Sarah, I love the imagery you create between the two verses, ending with the ‘box of hope’. Beautifully lyrical… xxxx

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  6. beautiful imagery and I love the image as well!

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