Sarah Potter Writes

Pursued by the Muses of prose and poetry

A something haiku #1

Sheets dance–a new day–
the night’s secrets cleansed and aired,
its ghosts blown away.

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11 thoughts on “A something haiku #1

  1. lovely! there’s something special about sheets hanging out on the line. And somehow this captures the cleansing away of the dark night of the soul.

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    • Thank you 🙂 And I agree totally with what you say. I’ve had some quite perfect moments of absolute equilibrium, if not spiritual uplift, while hanging washing on the line! Would never use a tumble drier. Apart from the amount of electricity it uses, clothes seem so much fresher if allowed to dry naturally.

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  2. Very lovely. Thank you. Hope you are well. Within the next week I hope to get better internet connectivity via my library.

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  3. Dark night of the soul maybe, flag of conquest also – a certain sensuality – nice concept whispered well…ps – posted of course!

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  4. Dear Sarah, this piece captures so much! I will never look at sheets on a line the same way again. It is my new favorite haiku.

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