Genre: Saucy fiction
Word count: 100
~~MEASURING UP~~
“Gosh, you’re tall!” people keep saying to me. How the hell would they like it, if I came up to them and said, “You’re short”?
At my first school, I was the shortest in the class. Then I swear that Mum put a cake in my lunchbox with similar magical ingredients to the one Alice ate in Wonderland, but without the shrinking antidote.
There’s this cute fellow at university, who calls me “his Amazonian beauty”. His mates tease him about conversing with my breasts.
Oh, they of limited imagination. He’s a mathematician and knows all about how to handle figures.
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Photo Prompt: Jennifer Pendergast
Friday Fictioneers: 100 word stories
Nice ending with the mathematician and figures.
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Thank you, Frank 🙂
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I loved the last line the most, made me giggle. Great story.
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Thank you, Sy 🙂 I’m glad my story prompted giggles.
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A wicked sense of humor, you have, Sarah! Very enjoyable, my friend. I howled at the last line. Great read to start my day!
Are you tall? 🙂
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Lovely! I’m so happy to have made you howl, Bill 🙂 I’m 5′ 8″ tall, so quite tall but by no means Amazonian. I used to have a boyfriend who was shorter than me. He was a violinist. I could say something saucy here about his being good at fiddling with his bow… 😉
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A wonderful read, Sarah. You really made me laugh. For some strange reason, that very un-PC song ‘Short people’ by Randy Newman, popped into my head and I doubt I’ll be able to get rid of it for a while. 😆
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Oh Sylvia, I’m glad I made you laugh 🙂 And thanks for telling me about Randy Newman’s un-PC song, which I’d never heard of before. I just popped over to YouTube to listen to it. Now it will be on my brain, too, as I pick up tunes very quickly!
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It’s a lot of fun, isn’t it? I first heard it sung by the King’s Singers. They did a brilliant rendition. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ANIj1wfMuK4
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That is brilliant recording. Thanks for the link 🙂
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That *is* saucy fiction, nice! I like the bit about the mathematician and the figures, and am glad she found someone who appreciates her virtues!
I can relate a bit about the “you’re tall” comments given how often I get the comment, “You’re so pale!” People mean it badly, I know, but I try to pretend they meant it as a compliment, and say, “Why thank you!” After that it’s harder for them to admit, “No, I meant it as an insult.” 😉
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Thank you, Joy 🙂
My son will relate to the “You’re so pale!” comment. I must tell him to try that response of yours, next time someone says it to him. My problem is being very slim, so people assume I’m on a diet and dish up the smallest portion of food for me when I have a huge appetite. I once asked a woman who was hosting a dinner party, why she had given my husband the biggest portion of pudding, when it was me who wanted to put weight on and not him. She didn’t invite me again, but my husband now knows to swap puddings with me when this happens! People, and their personal comments D:
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Oh my, if people are presumptuous enough to serve out different sized portions to their guests without asking, they should expect said guests to engage in trading negotiations!
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Nothing sexier than a partner who knows how to handle figures and who isn’t intimidated for things that seem too high.
Love the tone and theme of the piece. And your genre note made me giggle… and then nod. 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed my cheeky little story, Magaly 🙂
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Hee hee. Being short has a few advantages! 🙂
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Iain, are you short, by any chance? 😉
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Below average height, and thankful for it 🙂
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Love it!
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Thank you, Anarette 🙂
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In answer to your question in the first paragraph, simply ask Rochelle. She knows all about being vertically challenged.
I’ve always enjoyed math. One thing I’ve discovered when handling figures, the more you go over them the better you become at solving their mysteries.
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Rochelle is the same height as my Granny was, and she was married to a man of 6′ 4″.
I’m glad to hear that you are a determined solver of the mysteries of figures. Lucky figures!
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Delightful! A nice easy read with a grin at the end. Simply perfect.
Click to read my 100 words!
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Thank you so much, Keith 🙂
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Dear Sarah,
I love this story so much I nearly applauded. It’s still dark out so I didn’t want to wake Jan so I didn’t clap. Delightful story. While it’s hard on boys to be short it’s difficult for girls to be tall. (Of course I’ll never know that firsthand.) The last line is perfect. This one is definitely among my favorites for the week. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
I adore the image of you awake in the early hours and sitting on your hands to stop applauding. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Can you see me glowing at your praise from here? 🙂
All best wishes,
Sarah
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This was fantastic, Sarah! I loved it and burst out laughing! As you know, I’m a smidge taller than you and nothing makes me laugh more when I’m told “Oooh… I like tall women…” Now I’m going to have to wonder why… 😉
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Thank you, Dale. I’m very happy that this story made so many people laugh 🙂 In answer to your last comment, go and find a short mathematician and he’ll show you why 😉
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Ha ha ha! I’m not wondering now that I’ve read your story!!
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Clever! 🙂
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Thank you, Robert 🙂
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We may well be neighbours – I notice that you class yourself as ‘British eccentric’.
I’m in York.
I’m prolly eccentric too.
Certainly you would think so from my words. 🙂
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Eccentric is good 🙂 I’m down south, in sunny Sussex-by-the-sea, but I visited York many years ago, as I had friends in the York Astronomy Society. We once raised money for the society by doing the Lyke Wake Walk across the Moors.
In my latest, not yet published speculative novel, one of my characters passes through York whilst fleeing from pursuers. Her bicycle meets its end on a cobbled street!
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Ha! Perhaps that would be Micklegate. 🙂
So you’d be familiar with York Observatory in the Museum Gardens then.
Yes – eccentric is marvellously good – just ask the Pythons. 🙂
Nearest I have been to Sussex is Worthing.
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The incident with the bicycle happens in The Shambles.
I’m an East Sussex girl.
And yes, I was raised on Monty Python. Just love it. I’m first-rate at any number of Python silly walks!
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Ah – The Shambles, of course. 🙂
Michael Palin is coming to York this tomorrow as part of the York Literature Festival. Tickets are twenty two quid a pop.
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Wish I’d had some of that magic cake. And I think the mathematician will soon get a handle on the statistical side of his conquest.
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From your comment, Sandra, I’m guessing you’re small and dainty in stature, like Rochelle, but doubtless of similarly huge personality!
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Great, novel use of the photo prompt, Sarah. I didn’t expect anyone to do what you’ve so delightfully called a saucy story. Wonderful observation re: how people feel it’s okay to remark on other people’s bodies (as if they were asked). I used to get the skinny/thin comments all the time, before children anyway.
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Thanks, Leigh. I didn’t expect it to turn into a saucy story either. The literary muse took hold of me and started to dish up that surprise halfway through. As a writer, I love being a pantser, rather than a plotter. It’s so much more suspenseful.
I got the skinny comments after having children. Before that, I had an hourglass figure that weighed a couple of stones more.
People and their comments. I only ever comment on someone’s appearance if I have something genuinely nice to say that will cheer them up, otherwise I keep quiet.
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Sarah, I used to do the “I wish to report a burglary . . . a burglary” voice pretty well, but my husband hates how loud I have to get to pitch my voice so shriekingly high like that. Cool that you can do silly walks.
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My son is an expert at the spam sketch and the dead parrot one. He refuses to perform the Lumberjack song, though!
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I can picture it! It helps to be tall (not to mention British) for the spam and dead parrot as Chapman and Cleese, so I’ll bet J’s a natural. 🙂
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…especially after a few glasses of wine!
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Loved all the comments that followed your fab story.
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Thank you, Michael. Yes, this story does seem to have triggered some entertaining comments! Quite the party 🙂
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That’s a funny story, Sarah 🙂 My mother was taller than my father, so I don’t have this complex and don’t care. There are more important things, right ? 🙂
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Thanks, Inese. I’m glad the story amused you 🙂 And I agree with you, there are definitely more important things than what height people are. Some are so hooked on body image, whether it’s their own or other people’s bodies. There should be a place in this world for all shapes and sizes without censure. We should celebrate differences and not expect everybody to conform to a standard. It’s not like people can choose what height they are and, heaven forbid, that we should go down the route of designer babies!
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And a mathematician probably makes a great pi too. Chalk one up for Napoléon.
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Some historians will argue that Napoleon was only short by today’s standards, but was of fairly average height for his time; that it was his enemies who spread misinformation about his diminutive stature to humiliate him. Still, he kept Josephine happy by all accounts, whatever his size!
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Great fun Sarah, you have a gift for any genre 🙂
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Thank you, Andrea 🙂 I like to experiment with different genres, which is part of the fun of writing 100-word stories.
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Love the angle you took.
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Thank you 🙂
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Really fun Sarah 😃
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Thank you, Louise 🙂
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Perfect last line and well woven story throughout, great take. It reminded me of when I put got larger, the English would all say politely, “you’re putting on a bit of weight, when I returned to Portugal, my Portuguese friends all went, “Gosh, you’ve got fat!”
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Thank you, Michael 🙂 Sadly, I’ve noticed that quite often the English say things politely to a person’s face, but then be rude behind their back. Out of interest, had you got fat? I’m guessing that you weren’t too offended by their remarks, or you wouldn’t still be calling them friends.
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That last line made me giggle.
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That was so much fun.Brilliant last line. We need more saucy fiction.
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Hee-hee! Thank you. I’ll take note of that for future reference 😉
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Haha…brilliant! You’ve made me laugh again dearest Sarah. I do love your saucy fiction 😉 The last line is classic! xxxx
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You’ll be glad to hear, then, Sherri, that there’s quite a lot of sauce dished up in my speculative fiction novel, amidst plenty of drama. I’m halfway through the edits, although the sauce stays! 😉 xxxx
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Ooooh…I can’t wait!!! 😉 xxxx
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