Genre: General Fiction
Word count: 100
~~A MATTER OF PERSPECTIVE~~
Whenever Seamus espied his ex-wife with that swanky billionaire, his legs gave out at the knees and he suffered an attack of vertigo.
In another life Seamus had been a violinist who played a Stradivarius, but now he dwelt under a railway arch, his home a cardboard box. Daily, he busked on a distressed fiddle. A few people tossed coins in his cap, but most passed him by, treating him as less than a bug.
Today, it dawned on him that bugs had been around a lot longer than humans had, and would probably outlive them all, including his ex-wife.
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Friday Fictioneers: 100 word stories
I’m too long-winded to write a story this short. LOL You do it well. I hope today brings you all you hoped for.
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Self-discipline, that’s all you require. I challenge you to have a go. Never say “never”. It’s a wonderful exercise that hones the editing skills when applied to longer works. I will be watching to see if you’re long-winded in your novel 😉 Only teasing 🙂
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Dear Sarah,
It is all a matter of perspective, isn’t it? You left me hopeful that Seamus would arise from the ashes. After all, sometimes the best revenge is success. 😉 Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle,
Even the thought of this sort of revenge can be incredibly motivating and strengthen perseverance. …I’ll enlarge on that statement, when we speak 😉
All best wishes,
Sarah
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Looking forward to it. 😉
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The last laugh.
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The last laugh, indeed.
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Like Rochelle, I was hoping he would rise again. Yes, he may outlive them but… will he be happy?
And now, I can’t help wonder how he let himself fall to such a level… hmmm….
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There are quite a few men living on the street in the UK, who have ended up there through divorce. It’s very sad D:
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Those are the ones who got screwed royally. So awful that ex-spouses can go to that level…
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D:
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Now I want to know more about the ex-wife!
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She certainly has the makings of a character in a novel … most likely a crime one!
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When you cannot fall deeper, the only way is up. I feel hopeful for Seamus
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I think he’s a survivor, but everything is down to what action he’ll take on reaching the conclusion that he’s definitely better off without his ex.
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With that kind of attitude, I suspect he’ll find a way to get out of the dumps… At least, I hope so.
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At least he hasn’t reached the stage of total apathy, so there’s still hope for him!
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A new attitude will help him recover. Maybe just my mind, but I couldn’t help sensing his ex-wife might have to watch her back… Nice one Sarah.
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Thanks, Iain. …Indeed, that attitude could easily change from his being a victim to a homicidal maniac, should he see her about town too much more.
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He is looking at the bright side for sure 😉 Love the surprising turn – hopefully for the better – that his mind takes. Great writing, Sarah
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Thank you, Christy 🙂 …Better for him, or better for her? 😉
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Haha! Only your brilliant mind would have come up with that response 😉 Have a terrific weekend, Sarah
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Somehow I fear the wife may be in the offing. Nice little mystery here.
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Certainly she should watch her back, if he was no longer weak at the knees and learned to emulate the cricket or grasshopper (haven’t managed to identify which category the bug fits into yet) and leap across great distances in one!
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It’s just a short hop from the penthouse to the poor house, especially if you take the shortcut through divorce court. My heart goes out to Seamus.
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Quite. It can ruin a man, especially if he draws the short straw in the settlement, which happens more often than not.
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This looks like the making of grand novel. Excellent writing.
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Thank you, Neel, for your kind comment 🙂 It wouldn’t be the first time that my flash fiction has grown into a novel!
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Great narrative Sarah.
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Thank you, Kim 🙂
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Hopefully, he can find a way back to a good life for himself, and with a better person at his side.
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I hope so, too, but I think he might have trust issues, so someone would have to be very patient and understanding with him.
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So thought provoking from so many perspectives! Good stuff! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Charlene 🙂
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I hope he finds his mojo again. After all he has a talent to share with the world.
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I guess it depends upon whom he encounters when he’s down; whether anyone is willing to offer him some practical help and emotional support.
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Such a dreadful way to end your married life. But a philophic bent should see him through.
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I’ve come across some real philosophers out on the streets living rough. If he lays off the booze and drugs, then I like to think that there’s hope for him — unless he does something violent, of course.
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He has a philosophical way of looking at things but, does the line about bugs outliving humans and his wife suggest he’s about to do something physical?
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Now that would be giving the game away, if I told you 😉
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I’ve been absent from your blog for too long, and I have missed feasting on Friday Fictioneers. I was lured by the fab photo I saw on Facebook. He’s quite a dapper fellow isn’t he!
Maybe this isn’t a sad tale at all. Rather lament the loss of his ex-wife to the billionaire, I prefer to see him thinking he had a lucky escape.
Maybe he’s happier with a simple life that could have been a hollow, emotionless void if his wife had remained by his side who would always want more, and chase something just out of reach whilst never satisfied.
This dazzling life form is celebrating his music, his passion, and the fact that he doesn’t need money or a checklist of material junk to make him happy. He gets vertigo out of relief, not grief.
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Hey, Dave, wonderful to see you back, visiting my blog. I wasn’t really expecting to hear from you, when off on your adventure. Am very glad you returned in one piece. Of course, you’ve been missed. I hope your group raised loads of money for the ZSEA.
Re my story. I’ve met materialistic women like that and have we have absolutely nothing to say to each other. In fact, I suspect that we’re a different species altogether! I love your comment, especially the bit about his vertigo.
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Always nice to have some optimistic perspective.
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The reasons behind any optimism he possesses might prove questionable, depending upon the outcome 😉
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I’m sure he’ll have his revenge, and bugs will indeed outlive us all. Great use of the prompt, too.
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Thanks 🙂
Bugs can live in the most hostile environments. I read somewhere that cockroaches could survive in the hostile outer atmosphere of Jupiter, if put to the test. In fact, I think that scientists have already carried out a lab experiment to prove this, by placing them in a mock up of the Jupiter atmosphere.
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I didn’t know that about the Jupiter atmosphere, but they would survive a nuclear war on Earth. Maybe they’ll take over next…
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Yes, indeed. Perhaps a nuclear war would cause them to mutate into a race of Blattodea sapiens!
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Love the twist at the end Sarah, too true the bugs will outlast us all…
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Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked the twist 🙂
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That is such an accurate title, we get lost in stupid things.
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And when we do get lost in stupid things, it’s often because we’re feeling worn down, powerless, or just plain bored, without any creative challenges or goals to strive towards.
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Perfect!
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Thank you, Naomi 🙂
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Wonderful post
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Thank you 🙂
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oh most excellent and to the point Sarah!!
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Thank you, Cybele. I really enjoyed writing that one and, as you can see, it has triggered some most entertaining comments from others who have experienced various personal remarks about their appearances.
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