Often my mind returns to those fields where we lay gazing at the sky, sharing our dreams. Why couldn’t you have stayed with me and lived the simple life, tilling the soil, living in harmony with nature?
Instead, you became a scientist employed at a Government research facility, where you invented a device to regulate abnormal cell growth in the human body and cure all forms of cancer.
Terrorists modified the device for war but neither side won.
Us survivors live underground, unable to endure sunlight upon our mutated forms. We live off worms and dream of a time machine.
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Friday Fictioneers: 100 word stories
Photo prompt: image © Marie Gail Stratford
Ewww! (that’s my response to eating worms)
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Ewww, indeed. Spaghetti is okay, as long as it doesn’t wriggle!
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LOL…yes thank you.
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Lots of proteins in them there worms… 😉
Scary thought. Damned terrorists. Always have to come in and muck up whatever good there is!
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The trouble with terrorists is that from their point of view they’re freedom fighters. So sad that we can’t find a middle road and live in peace but as long as there’s inequality and we have opinions to express, I guess this won’t happen.
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Wow, this story is so powerful in so few words. I agree about the ick-factor in eating worms. That aside, here is a person who loves nature and regrets the path a loved one took–a path that destroyed their relationship and all that s/he treasured. Wow.
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Thank you, Lorna. If I had to choose between eating worms and eating spiders, I would choose the worms. It’s all relative 😉
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I’d chose starving. I know, I can say that now with a full belly. But I’m vegan and I’d eat grass first!
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…after brushing off the insects and slugs, of course 😉
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Of course!
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The picture is very fitting for an apocalyptic story Sarah. You had me fooled with the first paragraph, I thought it was going to be wistful and romantic, I should have known better 🙂
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Yes, Andrea… You should have! 😉
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Hee, hee, hee 🙂 You have me sussed, Dale!
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I quite like writing wistful and romantic interludes in my novels, Andrea, but these gentle moments are normally short-lived amidst all the conflicts and mayhem. Just can’t help myself!
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I have indeed, Ms Sarah! Once you’ve published one of your wistful and romantic interludes, we’ll enjoy them too!
I think we all like your little twisted, macabre side.
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Probably comes from having been a fan of “Amazing Stories” as a child, instead of “Bunty”!
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Wow! This is very scary. Good story though, Sarah. 🙂
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Sylvia, one day I’ll write something really sweet, nice, and non-scary 🙂 …Well, I keep promising to do so, anyway, but …
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“That will be the frosty Friday!” springs to mind. 😀
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Then we’ll have to wonder what is wrong?! 😉
I obviously say this in jest…
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🙂
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We have to be careful what we invent. It could have the power to destroy the world. Perhaps we have already invented what is going to end the world. I’d better practice eating worms.
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You mean inventions like nanotechnology, genetic modification of crops, and particle acceleration, to name a few?
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They’ll do for starters. 😦
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Ooh, that’s actually a better synopsis for the novel Wool than the blurb on the cover!
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Whoops, is that what Wool is about? I’ve got a copy of the novel but haven’t read it yet. If it’s the same story, it’s a total coincidence and a case of great minds think alike. Just shows there’s nothing totally original out there. Let’s hope I end up making as much money as Hugh Howey!
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Well, the first story has similarities with your piece, yet if I’d have read yours on the cover I wouldn’t have hesitated to read it like I did.
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Awesome Sarah – what an apocalyptic thought that is 😦
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Thank you, Roy 🙂 Hopefully it’s not a prediction!
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So sad – in war there are no winners.. But this is worse than many others.
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It’s so pointless all that destruction and there never seems an end to it. I’d love to hear or read about more good than bad things in the news, then I might write some happier stories!
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I guess one could get used to eating worms – or not. I agree with your character. Leave well enough alone. Well done.
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Even in this day and age, there’s a great difference between cultures as to what is considered disgusting or not, food-wise. For instance, in Japan they eat wasp crackers. A hunter-gatherer would eat woodlouse. A starving person would eat anything that kept them alive. If you can stop your food wriggling or crawling, then it’s less humungous than a meal that won’t keep still!
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A stunning story! Loved the tone and the sadness of their plight. The ending, “We live off worms and dream of a time machine,” is perfect.
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Thank you 🙂 Of course, with the help of a time machine, they might find that by altering the future, they have to live off something far worse than worms as an end scenario!
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a short story but oh so powerful Sarah! A cautionary tale for sure!
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Thank you, Cybele. A cautionary tale indeed. It’s tragic that inventions intended for the good of humankind can also backfire on us if they fall into the wrong hands.
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A powerful story. Even research done with the best of intentions can be twisted to evil ends.
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So sad, but all too true.
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A lovely but kind of sad story dear Sarah. Always love what you bring for Friday fictioneers. How is your dream book going on?
Swetank.
Be Bettr, STay Bettr!
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Thank you, Swetank 🙂 My book is going just fine, although not as fast as I would like as there are too many distractions. I’m trying to do two hours work on it a day before I do anything else. It seems to be working.
I hope everything is going well for you.
All best wishes
Sarah
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I am eager to read it soon .. can you tell me few things about it. What is the genre and anything else.. please..please!
Swetank.
Be Bettr, Stay Bettr! 😀
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The novel is crossover urban fantasy set in a girl’s boarding school in 1967 (crossover meaning that it’s suitable for older teenagers and adults).
Strange things happen after the head girl conducts a seance and lets something dangerous through from another dimension.
I will probably have a go self-publishing this novel, at the same time as trying to place my more recent novel with literary agents. It’s very hard to get anywhere down the traditional route, so I must keep other options open.
Of course, I will keep you up-to-date with any progress on either front. And good to see that you are so eager to read my work. Thanks:-)
All best wishes
Sarah
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Great take on the prompt. I liked it. 🙂
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Thank you, Susan 🙂
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A sad story. I liked your ending about the time machine.
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If things got that hopeless, I guess that a time machine might seem the only dream left to have, however implausible.
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Interesting story and a cautionary tale with some truth behind it. One gammar note: The final paragraph should begin with “we” instead of “us.”
Good work.
All my best,
MG
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You’ve created a problem for me here, MG. If I replace “us” with “we”, it might improve the “gammar” (grammar!) but it will leave me with two consecutive sentences beginning with the same word. I think I’ll leave it as it is and put it down to authentic characterisation and the fact that my protagonist hasn’t been to school 😉
Thanks for pointing out this rule. I’ve just Googled on the subject. Of course, you’re right and that’s why writers need editors, as it’s impossible to know everything.
All best wishes
Sarah
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I thought you wrote “Us” instead of “We” on purpose to reflect their speech…
BTW… love your new photo!
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It’s how I heard the protagonist’s voice in my head. So yes, it did reflect her speech. I’m just wondering how my novel (under edit) will go down in the US, with its turns of phrase and slang from the 60s, especially when it comes to the London mods.
Thanks, re the photo. My son took it the other day, when I was relaxing in the sunshine in my favourite spot outside the kitchen.
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Well I hope they leave well enough alone! Which they should if you are portraying a dialect or regional slang!
Well you can tell him he did a wonderful job!
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Who can you trust, if not oncologists?
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The oncologists are okay. It’s the other “ists” in my story who enjoy cutting lives short that I’m more worried about.
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Dear Sarah,
You’ve told a lot of story in a short space. As dynamite comes in small packages, your story is powerful and explosive. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thank you. I’m sure there are some brief outlines to novels in some of my 100 word stories. If there are, they will eventually insist upon me bulking them out by 70K+ words. It has happened to me before!
I love your analogy re dynamite 🙂
All best wishes
Sarah
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You had me fooled with this one Sarah, but then I’m not at all surprised. What a terrible thought, to end up like that when it all started out so noble and filled with promise. Always the darkness lurking. As for eating worms, horrid, but I suppose if that’s all there is. And I noticed your lovely new photo, scrolling down to catch up with your posts… 🙂 xxxx
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Fooled but for a moment, Sherri. I think that my stories often have darkness lurking, as I walk through life seeing much that’s beautiful, while at the same time being painfully aware of a shadow at my shoulder. This is probably why I’m a realist rather than an optimist, and writing fantasy/speculative my safe area to escape to and explore darkness and light. xxxx
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I love how you put this Sarah, and I feel just the same way as you express the same reasons why I veer back into the shadows when I write flash fiction. You are so right about the difference between being an optimist and a realist. Which, as we both know, is far from being negative and doom and gloom. A I am beginning to understand this through writing fiction just how it helps me cope with that permanent feeling of living life waiting for the ‘other shoe to drop’. It’s great having our escape routes isn’t it? Big hugs…xxxx
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Escape routes are a must, as long as we don’t disappear into them permanently. Big hugs to you, too, dear Sherri. xxxx
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So very true dear Sarah, and so very wise. Feeling those hugs 🙂 xxxx
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