When the grey first came, people said, “Not to worry. It will pass.” But the greenhouse gases built up, temperate climates hit 43ËšC midwinter, and the sea-levels rose, gobbling up all the coastal resorts.
Those people who survived, congregated on high ground and walked around naked, gasping and wheezing.
It had all started with microscopic weather manipulation devices placed inside the lids of waste-disposal bins around the world: so much more effective than pumping silver oxide into the atmosphere from above. The aliens were time-travellers, which meant they could wipe us out and colonise our planet in under five minutes.
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Photo Prompt: The Reclining Gentleman
Friday Fictioneers — 100-word stories
5 minutes eh 😉
Good story Sarah!
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Now that is scary stuff Sarah…great story…but very scary 😮
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Thank you, Sherri.
You know, I even freaked myself out, a little! Not nice aliens, at all D:
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😀
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Eeeeek, scary!
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At least your hair is too long to stand on end with fright:-)
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Hehe, true! 🙂
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Ooh, what happened to friendly little green men that drop in for afternoon tea?
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Hee, hee. Aren’t they just lov-e-ly?
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You do these so well and so succinctly. I probably liked the last paragraph the most, because up until then I was guessing anthropogenic. And I love twists like that. And now that you mention it, those bins do look Dalek-like! 🙂
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Thanks, Leigh. Twists are such fun. I get so excited when they happen, whether it’s something I’m reading or writing.
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Very chilling! You know, I will say I thought there was something funny about the logo on that trash can! But after considering this for about 5 minutes, I guess it would have been too late for me… thanks for the fun story!
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Thank you, John.
Of course, you’d have had plenty of time to suss out the logo — albeit, not quality time. Only the time-travelling aliens could carry out their plan in 5 minutes.
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I didn’t expected aliens, well done!
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Thank you, Elizabeth. I’m always glad to surprise!
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Colonize in under five minutes. Now that’s efficiency! Well done, Sarah.
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Thank you, Amy.
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Dear Sarah,
Well written. Incredibly grim, but well written. Almost has me running for the Risperdal. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Dear Rochelle
Thanks, but perish the thought that I’d send anyone running for their Risperdal 😉
I really must write something sweet and romantic occasionally. Believe it or not, I can manage it, although even some of my romances tend to be between unhinged people.
All the best
Sarah
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They’re pretty unfriendly aliens. And they’re onto a foolproof plan, given our tendency to put our heads in the sand. A great idea and a scary surprise ending. Most enjoyable.
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Thank you, Margaret.
Whenever people talk about making contact with aliens, I have this background fear that the aliens will be so advanced, we’ll be of no more significance to them other than as food or as the equivalent of small insects to crush underfoot. I used to scare myself silly with this notion as a child, but that didn’t stop me UFO spotting: neither did my fear of monsters lurking under my bed stop me reading about monsters. And my two favourite things to buy at the newsagents as a child (nothing girlie, oh, no) — Eagle Comic and Amazing Stories!
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Wow, a lot of stuff going on in this short little story. Nice work!
Claire
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Thank you, Claire 🙂
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Scary Sarah – colonized in 5 minutes, we don’t stand a chance!
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Doubtless you can tell from the mood of the piece, Andrea, that I’ve always had my doubts that aliens would be sweet and cuddly like ET!
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Imaginative. Nice job.
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Thank you 🙂
PS Not nice on the part of the aliens, though!
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No but why should the aliens be any different than earthlings. 😦
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Yes, you’ve got a point there … unfortunately D:
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Oh I thought we were capable of doing this all for ourselves… but with alien help it goes so much better…
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Yes, I suppose aliens might assess us as heading for disaster anyway, and say the equivalent of ‘What the hell … why not hurry the inevitable along for those planet-wrecking humans?’
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Love it Sarah! A cautionary tale or wait! they’re already here!!
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Oh dear. There are lots of bins in our town that look like the ones in the photo prompt D:
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I really like your original take on the photo. A very subtle alien takeover indeed!
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Thank you, so much 🙂 I really liked your picture as a prompt, but haven’t sussed out where it is.
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It’s Tjornin lake in the centre of Reykjavik
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I’ve always wanted to visit Iceland. Such a geographically fascinating place.
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I went for the first time this year, it was stunning. Click on the Iceland tag on my blog for more pics (shameless plug!) 🙂
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I’ll go and have a look. Thanks 🙂
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Dear Sarah,
An imaginative take on the prompt. And we’ll never know. Well done.
Aloha,
Doug
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Dear Doug
Thank you. And I’m truly glad we’ll never know!
All the best
Sarah
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